6. "slaves to fashion"

In my opinion about “slaves to fashion”, I think in the present not some of people but there are many people that are slaves to fashion. Everywhere people will wear clothes that are fashion styles. And you can see many fashions of clothes in every time and everywhere. If the cloth shop doesn’t sell clothes that are fashionable, they couldn’t sell their clothes. So, you can see many fashions of clothes in many cloth shops for the requirement of customers. I think if I don’t wear fashion style, I would be strange for them. Not only fashion of clothes, but also ornaments are fashionable too. Many of ornaments such as shoulder cape, scarf, sun glasses, belt, necklace etc; these are supporting dresses that help you to be good-looking. Not in many shopping places, but in the school are many of ornament fashions too. I have seen many of students used lots of shoulder capes and scarf in school. There are many colors. And in addition, hair clip have a lot. I don’t know why they like its. Ok, it’s very beautiful but I think it can cause your hair disorder. I think many of students use ornament for upgrade them from the normal students and I think they want to be interesting for many of students in the school. Do you agree with me?